11-01-2011, 04:16 PM
Folks....I am totally baffled. I have never been able to rate what I write (what do I know?) I value the input of others and in my desire to improve I tend to go along with all the advise.
If the advise is conflicting my brain explodes and trickles out of my ear.
I think this particular poem is best allowed to limp away to a quiet place to lick its wounds (and die?)
Thanks to everyone for their input.
ps I rather liked it once.
If the advise is conflicting my brain explodes and trickles out of my ear.
I think this particular poem is best allowed to limp away to a quiet place to lick its wounds (and die?)
Thanks to everyone for their input.
ps I rather liked it once.