Growing Pains

[heslopian]

An uncomfortable duet has erupted "Uncomfortable" and "erupted" make strange bedfellows. The former implies a kind of dormant unease, while the latter is flamboyant. Still, I think it works, and is interesting simply because of its unusual nature.

beside stoically frozen pictures, Are both adjectives needed? How about just "beside stoic pictures"?
digital heartbeats
and electric impulses. I like the semantic field "digital" and "electric" create, denying humanity almost.

Injuries peeled away like egg shells, Nice image.
fragilely calcified
exposing the soft underbelly of deceit; Another good semantic field at work here with "egg shells", "fragilely" and "soft".

love is rarely enough. This line doesn't make sense - should be "rare" - but I'm wondering if it's supposed to?

Thanks for the read, Aish