11-01-2011, 07:09 AM
(10-22-2011, 06:06 PM)Aish Wrote: An uncomfortable duet has erupted
beside stoically frozen pictures,
digital heartbeats
and electric impulses.
Injuries peeled away like egg shells,
fragilely calcified
exposing the soft underbelly of deceit;
love is rarely enough.
The dction made me read this slowly and deliberately- each word rolled around and counted, although it was difficult to enunciate 'fragilely calcified'.
The expression of sensitivity comes across really well.