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The Storm
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11-01-2011, 03:59 AM
Abu: I will concede that at times adverbs can be fine choices. Most of the time though they weigh down the line. An abundance of adverbs usually signals to me that the writer hasn't settled on the right verb. Or as you say it could be adverbism
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 10-29-2011, 01:07 AM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 03:51 AM
RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 10-29-2011, 03:53 AM
RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-29-2011, 04:50 AM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 05:05 AM
RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 10-29-2011, 06:01 AM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 06:32 AM
RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-29-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: The Storm - by addy - 10-29-2011, 09:25 AM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 03:46 PM
RE: The Storm - by billy - 10-30-2011, 12:54 PM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-31-2011, 03:00 PM
RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-31-2011, 11:19 PM
RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 11-01-2011, 02:53 AM
RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 11-01-2011, 03:38 AM
RE: The Storm - by Todd - 11-01-2011, 03:59 AM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 04:17 AM
RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 11-01-2011, 04:58 AM
RE: The Storm - by Todd - 11-01-2011, 04:59 AM
RE: The Storm - by Ca ne fait rien - 11-01-2011, 07:18 AM
RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 04:00 PM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 04:25 PM
RE: The Storm - by addy - 11-01-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 05:33 PM
RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 06:23 PM
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