10-31-2011, 04:33 AM
WHAT DO YOU THINK SO FAR?! it is for a writing conference contest
]Asteroid 15338
The universe’s rising star;
Shining, excelling,
Gone.
Though not forever,
For now you lie,
Nestled between
The belt of Mars and Jupiter;
A life ever-lasting,
Spent orbiting the Sun.
Only to be seen
With the keen,
Inquisitive eye.
Your presence constant,
A reminder to all,
To dream, to achieve.
]Asteroid 15338
The universe’s rising star;
Shining, excelling,
Gone.
Though not forever,
For now you lie,
Nestled between
The belt of Mars and Jupiter;
A life ever-lasting,
Spent orbiting the Sun.
Only to be seen
With the keen,
Inquisitive eye.
Your presence constant,
A reminder to all,
To dream, to achieve.