The Storm

The Storm

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10-29-2011, 05:05 AM

Hi, Todd

You'll have to elaborate a bit more - I don't know what 'expositional asides' means!

If I leave those three lines out won't the same apply to all the other lines too? They're just part of the story, aren't they? Can you show me what you mean?

Thanks, Jill

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The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-28-2011, 04:40 PM

RE: The Storm - by billy - 10-28-2011, 08:38 PM

RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 10-29-2011, 01:07 AM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 03:51 AM

RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 10-29-2011, 03:53 AM

RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-29-2011, 04:50 AM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 05:05 AM

RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 10-29-2011, 06:01 AM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 06:32 AM

RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-29-2011, 08:45 AM

RE: The Storm - by addy - 10-29-2011, 09:25 AM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-29-2011, 03:46 PM

RE: The Storm - by billy - 10-30-2011, 12:54 PM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 10-31-2011, 03:00 PM

RE: The Storm - by Todd - 10-31-2011, 11:19 PM

RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 11-01-2011, 02:53 AM

RE: The Storm - by abu nuwas - 11-01-2011, 03:38 AM

RE: The Storm - by Todd - 11-01-2011, 03:59 AM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 04:17 AM

RE: The Storm - by Wildcard - 11-01-2011, 04:58 AM

RE: The Storm - by Todd - 11-01-2011, 04:59 AM

RE: The Storm - by Ca ne fait rien - 11-01-2011, 07:18 AM

RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 04:00 PM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 04:16 PM

RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 04:25 PM

RE: The Storm - by addy - 11-01-2011, 04:53 PM

RE: The Storm - by grannyjill - 11-01-2011, 05:33 PM

RE: The Storm - by billy - 11-01-2011, 06:23 PM

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