Job Centre Blues
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Thanks for the feedback, PhilatoneSmile I've been debating with myself about whether I should put the first "I work with what I'm given" in brackets. After your suggestion I think I may.
Does the word "suicide" make the third line too telling?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Job Centre Blues - by heslopian - 10-27-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by abu nuwas - 10-27-2011, 08:17 PM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by heslopian - 10-27-2011, 08:38 PM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by abu nuwas - 10-27-2011, 11:54 PM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by Philatone - 10-28-2011, 05:29 AM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by heslopian - 10-28-2011, 05:54 AM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by addy - 10-28-2011, 08:51 AM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by billy - 10-28-2011, 08:56 AM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by heslopian - 10-28-2011, 06:30 PM
RE: Job Centre Blues - by billy - 10-28-2011, 08:36 PM



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