Presenting

Presenting

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#15

10-24-2011, 12:45 PM

miss brave knickers. Smile

i didn't think the removal of the verse was something that was needed, but it does make a difference. now the
distinction of the meter between the 2nd 3rd 4th and 5th is more pronounced and it also feels more rhythmical.
good edit from here. Wink

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Presenting - by Leanne - 10-16-2011, 07:40 AM

RE: Presenting - by Wildcard - 10-16-2011, 12:06 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-16-2011, 01:45 PM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-16-2011, 02:02 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-17-2011, 06:11 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-17-2011, 02:50 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-18-2011, 05:38 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-18-2011, 06:07 AM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-18-2011, 07:03 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-18-2011, 09:56 AM

RE: Presenting - by Philatone - 10-18-2011, 02:38 PM

RE: Presenting - by addy - 10-20-2011, 12:11 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-24-2011, 06:59 AM

RE: Presenting - by abu nuwas - 10-24-2011, 08:53 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-24-2011, 12:45 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-26-2011, 03:31 PM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-27-2011, 05:31 AM

RE: Presenting - by abu nuwas - 10-27-2011, 08:04 AM

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