It Was All Your Fault:

It Was All Your Fault:

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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10-24-2011, 11:46 AM

i am confused hehe.
thanks for the feedback everyone.
i do like mortality grasped because it gets rid of 'of.
i changed making to cleaved, i have no idea why but it felt good.
still undecided on the last line.

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It Was All Your Fault: - by billy - 10-22-2011, 06:17 PM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by John Holland - 10-23-2011, 12:26 PM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by billy - 10-23-2011, 05:57 PM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by Philatone - 10-24-2011, 02:57 AM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by billy - 10-24-2011, 05:47 AM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by Leanne - 10-24-2011, 06:11 AM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by addy - 10-24-2011, 08:43 AM

RE: It Was All Your Fault: - by billy - 10-24-2011, 11:46 AM

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