Divine Tracks:

[addy]

Very bitter and sharply satirical. Most of it reads out beautifully (especially stanza 3 and how it breaks apart at the end). Personally i think rephrasing the first line might make it stronger ("usually' reads a little weak to me as a first word) but that's just me. Also in the line "Hispanics name male offspring after Him", don't think you need to qualify that as male anymore (if you know/hear the name its obvious).

Thanks for sharing. Quite an effective write.