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Elegy for England
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10-24-2011, 09:04 AM
Nice piece, Jack. The imagery had a great mood to them and were nicely accentuated. I thought some line breaks were placed oddly, but upon re-reading i do appreciate the run-on, train-of-thought quality it gives. Though the imagery is strong it is smothered just enough by the structure to give it a unified, blanketing feel.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Elegy for England - by heslopian - 10-24-2011, 02:42 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by Leanne - 10-24-2011, 06:20 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by addy - 10-24-2011, 09:04 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by heslopian - 10-24-2011, 09:10 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by billy - 10-24-2011, 11:56 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by heslopian - 10-24-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: Elegy for England - by billy - 10-24-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: Elegy for England - by Wildcard - 10-25-2011, 12:04 AM
RE: Elegy for England - by abu nuwas - 10-25-2011, 11:35 PM
RE: Elegy for England - by heslopian - 10-26-2011, 07:47 AM
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