Presenting

Presenting

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#13

10-24-2011, 06:59 AM

Thanks all for the feedback. Rather than touching the zeitgeist stanza, which I tend to think is the most important of the poem, I've removed the erotica one to make the change in tone less offensive.

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Presenting - by Leanne - 10-16-2011, 07:40 AM

RE: Presenting - by Wildcard - 10-16-2011, 12:06 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-16-2011, 01:45 PM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-16-2011, 02:02 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-17-2011, 06:11 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-17-2011, 02:50 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-18-2011, 05:38 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-18-2011, 06:07 AM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-18-2011, 07:03 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-18-2011, 09:56 AM

RE: Presenting - by Philatone - 10-18-2011, 02:38 PM

RE: Presenting - by addy - 10-20-2011, 12:11 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-24-2011, 06:59 AM

RE: Presenting - by abu nuwas - 10-24-2011, 08:53 AM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-24-2011, 12:45 PM

RE: Presenting - by Leanne - 10-26-2011, 03:31 PM

RE: Presenting - by billy - 10-27-2011, 05:31 AM

RE: Presenting - by abu nuwas - 10-27-2011, 08:04 AM

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