Elegy for England

[Leanne]

I like the overall feel of this Jack, especially "the sun shone fierce and the cars were merry", a very evocative line to contrast against the "verdant fields".

I think you've gone a little overboard with the telling, eg. "though naught is permanent I can still take pleasure from that day" -- this is implicit in your previous lines.

Those used condoms look so lambent and lovely in the moonlight