Growing Pains
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it sounds like an internet romance
in truth i can't think of anything to change.
while the last line feels cliche it works well in the context i'm reading in it.
love is often rarely enough, because often it isn't love Wink

thanks for read
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Growing Pains - by Aish - 10-22-2011, 06:06 PM
RE: Growing Pains - by billy - 10-24-2011, 05:55 AM
RE: Growing Pains - by Leanne - 10-24-2011, 06:28 AM
RE: Growing Pains - by addy - 10-24-2011, 10:33 AM
RE: Growing Pains - by billy - 10-24-2011, 12:14 PM
RE: Growing Pains - by Wildcard - 10-25-2011, 12:20 AM
RE: Growing Pains - by Ca ne fait rien - 11-01-2011, 07:09 AM
RE: Growing Pains - by heslopian - 11-01-2011, 11:12 AM



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