a little bit

a little bit

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Are you alluding to me?

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10-23-2011, 05:38 PM (This post was last modified: 10-23-2011, 05:39 PM by billy.)

i also thinks drops needs a modifier.
and with john about the last line; tell is the correct syntax.
i id enjoy the softness of the poem, thanks for the read.

happy birthday, hope you have many more.

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a little bit - by bogpan - 10-20-2011, 03:13 PM

RE: a little bit - by addy - 10-20-2011, 04:33 PM

RE: a little bit - by John Holland - 10-23-2011, 12:31 PM

RE: a little bit - by billy - 10-23-2011, 05:38 PM

RE: a little bit - by Philatone - 10-24-2011, 02:53 AM

RE: a little bit - by Wildcard - 10-25-2011, 12:13 AM

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