10-23-2011, 12:05 AM
The shorter last line makes it punchier, but I am unqualified in the haiku game 
Made me smile. (Should you have a '?' instead of a period?)
Made me smile. (Should you have a '?' instead of a period?)
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Haiku: rustlers: - by billy - 10-22-2011, 06:30 PM
RE: Haiku: rustlers: - by Wildcard - 10-23-2011, 12:05 AM
RE: Haiku: rustlers: - by billy - 10-23-2011, 10:13 AM
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