10-20-2011, 02:55 PM
How very interesting. I have an older poem about Jerusalem, although the tone is completely different.
I really liked this. Your writing in general is quite smooth and seems to be a throwback to another era. I have no nits with the poem whatsoever. Thank you for sharing with us.
I really liked this. Your writing in general is quite smooth and seems to be a throwback to another era. I have no nits with the poem whatsoever. Thank you for sharing with us.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?