10-19-2011, 10:07 AM
Thanks for the feedback, Bilbo
I think I'll take Philatone's advice and create an image in the second line which indicates where I heard the music played. Maybe I could write another stanza about The Clash and Nirvana.
I think I'll take Philatone's advice and create an image in the second line which indicates where I heard the music played. Maybe I could write another stanza about The Clash and Nirvana.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe