For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway

For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway

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10-18-2011, 08:26 AM

I feel like I've just been on the journey. You handle the pace of the poem beautifully, to match the train. The repetition is great ('they're knitting in Dent' sounds exactly like the train going over tracks, very clever).

Thanks for the ride, Stef Smile

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For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-18-2011, 02:48 AM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by abu nuwas - 10-18-2011, 04:18 AM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by Leanne - 10-18-2011, 08:26 AM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-18-2011, 05:25 PM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by billy - 10-18-2011, 05:32 PM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-18-2011, 06:50 PM

RE: For the love of steam trains. Settle- Carlisle Railway - by addy - 10-20-2011, 12:20 PM

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