10-18-2011, 04:49 AM
Thanks for your comments. As far as 'picking' at the poem: pick away. Every comment is valuable to me and everyone's help is appreciated (even Billy's :p) You gave me some good points to think on and I'll do just that. If I seem adamant about 'Stygian' like it is, I hope no one thinks I am snubbing my nose at good crit. In the end I may cut or change it, but honestly I am sorely prejudiced toward leaving it. My appreciation for all the help I get from The Pig Pen

