10-17-2011, 11:33 AM
i have to agree that last lines, which try to give a comparison or insight often fail. (of course they don't always fail) but i think it does here.
before that, the poem is more of a snapshot that holds the fate of the ant in the palm of your hand, it has a feel of fun about the thing. a shall i shan't i. the last line seems to take all those qualities away. i really like everything above the last line. i don't think "is" is needed in L4,
thanks for the read.
before that, the poem is more of a snapshot that holds the fate of the ant in the palm of your hand, it has a feel of fun about the thing. a shall i shan't i. the last line seems to take all those qualities away. i really like everything above the last line. i don't think "is" is needed in L4,
thanks for the read.