10-16-2011, 06:55 PM
I like this last revision. I stopped at, "into another breaking
of the morning" and thought why not just "exhales into another morning?"
The rest was painted well enough for me even though I do not think much of lords and ladies, dead or alive. But that's just me. It did not move me, but I admired it.
of the morning" and thought why not just "exhales into another morning?"
The rest was painted well enough for me even though I do not think much of lords and ladies, dead or alive. But that's just me. It did not move me, but I admired it.