Going Away Party

[billy]

stygian gloom works.

i'm not so sure

i slip into the stygian
like cool, clean sheets

does.

it would work as

i slip into the Stygian-like cool

i slip into the stygian
like cool, clean sheets

sort of becomes a simile

which i think stops it being a metalepsis (i think)


filled with the Stygian

that works because then it becomes a solid ( as solid as one can be) metalepsis, where stygian is the metaphore for what ever context is being used. (again, i think that's the case)

but enough of the discussion you're the boss