10-16-2011, 12:06 PM
Is this a particular form? I see a rhyme pattern. I hesitate to even try to critique it anyway. Seemed bitter on the first reading. The first part seems like a complaint of (possibly years of) bad sex but later I got the feeling of the biological clock being blamed for the sex drive somehow? I'm probably messing it all up 
Oh and the entire third stanza is genius imo it bounces like a nursery rhyme, but with content that is full. I caught myself reading it more than once in one reading of the poem.
Oh and the entire third stanza is genius imo it bounces like a nursery rhyme, but with content that is full. I caught myself reading it more than once in one reading of the poem.