Going Away Party

Going Away Party

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10-16-2011, 11:21 AM

Leanne,
Thanks for such a detailed critique and for a lot of great ideas. I added a little more to the poem and rearranged the second(tercet?/stanza?/strophe?) Smile

Thanks for all the help and feel free to tell me it was better the other way Big Grin

Jack,
I decided to just try to be consistant with the punctuation throughout. Thanks for the advice and please tell me if you notice bad puncuation as it is a weak point of mine. Thanks again. Smile

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Going Away Party - by Wildcard - 10-13-2011, 06:13 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by Philatone - 10-13-2011, 09:10 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by Wildcard - 10-13-2011, 10:21 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by heslopian - 10-13-2011, 11:11 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by billy - 10-13-2011, 05:02 PM

RE: Going Away Party - by Wildcard - 10-14-2011, 02:38 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by billy - 10-16-2011, 12:50 PM

RE: Going Away Party - by Philatone - 10-14-2011, 04:22 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by Leanne - 10-15-2011, 06:23 AM

RE: Going Away Party - by Wildcard - 10-16-2011, 11:21 AM