Rise and Shine (senryu?)

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Rise and Shine (senryu?)

Aish

Raven Queen

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10-12-2011, 11:46 AM

First light greets worn floorboards
fondles evaporating dreams;
I fart my shalom.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Rise and Shine (senryu?) - by Aish - 10-12-2011, 11:46 AM

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