Saturn, With A Waning Moon
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Black majik filaments,
sticky with entropy
tie me down, like four-point restraints;

I am a husk in syndication,
reruns of dyspeptic cannibalism
and soullessly cultivated afternoons.

A cock crows abruptly, the vessel

breaks

freeing my moon.
Eager hands gather stars to be thrown
at a basalt sky -

and the sun bursts into atomic candy;
I am ardency incarnate,
the cheshire cat with a thousand truncated canaries.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by Aish - 10-11-2011, 02:54 PM
RE: Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by Philatone - 10-12-2011, 12:07 PM
RE: Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by only rob - 10-12-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by Wildcard - 10-13-2011, 04:36 AM
RE: Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by Aish - 10-13-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Saturn, With A Waning Moon - by billy - 10-13-2011, 06:13 PM



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