Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten

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Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten

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10-11-2011, 08:01 AM

(10-11-2011, 06:31 AM)Ca ne fait rien Wrote: Thanks Billy, I think I might lose the first stanza altogether. It is just not hanging right.

i have the same problem (hanging right Hysterical

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seriously; don't dismiss it out of hand stef.

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Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 02:46 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Leanne - 10-11-2011, 04:31 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 04:43 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by billy - 10-11-2011, 06:05 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 06:31 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by billy - 10-11-2011, 08:01 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 08:11 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Philatone - 10-11-2011, 07:41 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by billy - 10-11-2011, 08:11 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Leanne - 10-11-2011, 08:28 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 06:25 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by billy - 10-11-2011, 08:36 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Philatone - 10-11-2011, 10:45 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by addy - 10-11-2011, 12:14 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-11-2011, 04:24 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Leanne - 10-12-2011, 03:57 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-12-2011, 04:10 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Leanne - 10-12-2011, 04:16 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-12-2011, 04:24 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Leanne - 10-12-2011, 04:27 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by billy - 10-12-2011, 05:40 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-12-2011, 05:46 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by billy - 10-12-2011, 05:48 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Philatone - 10-12-2011, 11:49 AM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Wildcard - 10-12-2011, 12:38 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-12-2011, 05:45 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Wildcard - 10-12-2011, 08:29 PM

RE: Autumn Paintbrush - Revised/rewritten - by Patrick Traveler - 10-16-2011, 06:55 PM

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