Daytime Drama

Daytime Drama

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#10

10-10-2011, 01:25 AM

The poem does kind of change gears mid-way. I'll see if I can't soften the transitions some. Thanks for your input abu.

I did an edit based on some of the suggestions I received. Tell me what you think. Smile

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Daytime Drama - by Wildcard - 10-04-2011, 10:11 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Philatone - 10-05-2011, 04:51 AM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-05-2011, 05:31 AM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Wildcard - 10-05-2011, 07:14 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Leanne - 10-06-2011, 05:09 AM

RE: Daytime Drama - by addy - 10-06-2011, 02:26 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by billy - 10-06-2011, 03:01 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Wildcard - 10-06-2011, 08:32 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by abu nuwas - 10-06-2011, 08:34 PM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Wildcard - 10-10-2011, 01:25 AM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Philatone - 10-10-2011, 06:25 AM

RE: Daytime Drama - by Wildcard - 10-10-2011, 10:40 AM

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