Midnight

[billy]

Lamplight mixes with pitch black
to make a mournful shade of day,
driving madness from the earth.
Lamplight mixes with pitch black
in hollows false as human hearts,
the void disturbed by neon flames.
Lamplight mixes with pitch black
to make a mournful shade of day.

no constructive feedback here jack. the refrain works well
and it flows well. it has a period feel about it because of lamplight and i think it adds to the piece.
thanks for the read.