The Vulgarian
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Thanks for the heads up on the typo, Bilbo. I think I should stick with free verse. Everything I write in rhyme I'd happily gift the homeless to be used as toilet paper and needle wipersBig Grin
(10-09-2011, 09:50 AM)Leanne Wrote:  Got it out of your system now? Big Grin
That's why this is in the for fun section. It's about catharsis, a sudden cleansing burst of rage. And oddly enough I felt so much better about poetry after writing it. Thanks for the feedback LeanneSmile

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Vulgarian - by heslopian - 10-09-2011, 05:56 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by Leanne - 10-09-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by heslopian - 10-09-2011, 09:51 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:56 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by Wildcard - 10-11-2011, 12:42 AM
RE: The Vulgarian - by abu nuwas - 10-12-2011, 08:51 AM



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