10-09-2011, 09:03 AM
it feels song like karren
can i suggest a two verse poem? that way it's easier to to play with in order to make it original
at present it feels very generic and a little cold because of it.
abu gave some good feedback. see if you can utilize it
thanks for the read.
can i suggest a two verse poem? that way it's easier to to play with in order to make it original
at present it feels very generic and a little cold because of it.
abu gave some good feedback. see if you can utilize it
thanks for the read.