10-09-2011, 01:19 AM
Thanks for the feedback guys
Philatone, the kind of depression I had in mind was clinical. The form doesn't really allow one much psychological detail, but I'll see what I can do.
Abu, I love "doltish"! The alliteration works perfectly. Thanks!

Philatone, the kind of depression I had in mind was clinical. The form doesn't really allow one much psychological detail, but I'll see what I can do.
Abu, I love "doltish"! The alliteration works perfectly. Thanks!
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

