Depression, a triolet
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Thanks for the feedback guysSmile
Philatone, the kind of depression I had in mind was clinical. The form doesn't really allow one much psychological detail, but I'll see what I can do.
Abu, I love "doltish"! The alliteration works perfectly. Thanks!
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Depression, a triolet - by heslopian - 10-08-2011, 10:26 AM
RE: Depression, a triolet - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 12:52 PM
RE: Depression, a triolet - by abu nuwas - 10-08-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: Depression, a triolet - by heslopian - 10-09-2011, 01:19 AM



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