Defining Birds

Defining Birds

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10-08-2011, 09:21 AM

it seriously feels polished. i'm gratified you gave thought before the edit and didn't wildly slash away.
for me it's at that stage where anymore would be too much. love the way you used the feedback and
us to workshop it. thanks for sharing the edits Smile

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Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-05-2011, 12:36 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by billy - 10-05-2011, 01:28 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-05-2011, 01:43 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by billy - 10-05-2011, 03:03 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by ICSoria - 10-06-2011, 01:12 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-06-2011, 04:26 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by billy - 10-07-2011, 05:50 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by addy - 10-07-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by Leanne - 10-08-2011, 07:14 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by billy - 10-08-2011, 09:21 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 12:28 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by billy - 10-10-2011, 12:33 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by addy - 10-10-2011, 03:28 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by heslopian - 10-12-2011, 03:28 PM

RE: Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-13-2011, 04:47 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by heslopian - 10-13-2011, 08:26 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by Philatone - 10-13-2011, 08:44 AM

RE: Defining Birds - by heslopian - 10-13-2011, 11:04 AM

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