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To a Poet
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10-08-2011, 06:44 AM
Yeah, this is solid. I agree with Billy on making Jealousy an It on L2. The opening has more power, I liked the Sunday mornings addition, and your conclusion gives me the payoff I was looking for. Right now, it looks very good. I'd probably spot check it in 3-6 months, but I'd say very successful rewrite.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-07-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: To a Poet - by heslopian - 10-07-2011, 06:47 PM
RE: To a Poet - by Todd - 10-07-2011, 10:59 PM
RE: To a Poet - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 04:32 AM
RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-08-2011, 06:09 AM
RE: To a Poet - by Todd - 10-08-2011, 06:44 AM
RE: To a Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-08-2011, 09:14 AM
RE: To a Poet - by Philatone - 10-08-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: To a Poet - by Aish - 10-09-2011, 01:19 AM
RE: To a Poet - by billy - 10-09-2011, 09:51 AM
RE: To a Poet - by addy - 10-10-2011, 03:46 PM
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