10-08-2011, 04:46 AM
Thank you again, Todd. I dropped 'murmuring' down a line.
I'm contemplating 'inscribed' , and your comment it doesn't add enough. I would like to expand it, but am afraid using something like "in the Book of Life" is too overtly religious. I don't want it to be heavy handed, and certainly don't want it detracting from the other connotations. Suggestions?
I'm contemplating 'inscribed' , and your comment it doesn't add enough. I would like to expand it, but am afraid using something like "in the Book of Life" is too overtly religious. I don't want it to be heavy handed, and certainly don't want it detracting from the other connotations. Suggestions?
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?