Tyrant
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Thanks for the feedback, PhilatoneSmile The repetition of "keys" is something I can't really see a way around (unless you have a suggestion?) but I'll try and do something about "blouse".
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Tyrant - by heslopian - 10-06-2011, 02:35 PM
RE: Tyrant - by Philatone - 10-06-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: Tyrant - by heslopian - 10-07-2011, 12:31 AM
RE: Tyrant - by Philatone - 10-07-2011, 05:26 AM
RE: Tyrant - by heslopian - 10-07-2011, 10:42 AM
RE: Tyrant - by billy - 10-07-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: Tyrant - by heslopian - 10-07-2011, 11:38 AM
RE: Tyrant - by Todd - 10-08-2011, 04:29 AM



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