10-07-2011, 12:31 AM
Thanks for the feedback, Philatone
The repetition of "keys" is something I can't really see a way around (unless you have a suggestion?) but I'll try and do something about "blouse".
The repetition of "keys" is something I can't really see a way around (unless you have a suggestion?) but I'll try and do something about "blouse".
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

