10-06-2011, 08:32 PM
Leanne,
I'm gonna have to start sending you guys donations for all the cool stuff you check me on. I'll definitely look into cleaning up the last stanza and I really like the particular suggestions you made. Thanks for reading and for the feedback.
addy,
'Silent smiles shared' was an after thought really. I appreciate the nice things you said and for providing feedback. 'Bustling' could be better. Now that you've pointed it out I would have to agree. Will definitely go back and have a look at that. You've given me some valuable input. Thanks a lot.
Billy,
Thanks for reading and feedback. I will look at moving 'hop' and re-evaluate the triple 's' line. Thanks for a pleasant and honest critique.
I'm gonna have to start sending you guys donations for all the cool stuff you check me on. I'll definitely look into cleaning up the last stanza and I really like the particular suggestions you made. Thanks for reading and for the feedback.
addy,
'Silent smiles shared' was an after thought really. I appreciate the nice things you said and for providing feedback. 'Bustling' could be better. Now that you've pointed it out I would have to agree. Will definitely go back and have a look at that. You've given me some valuable input. Thanks a lot.
Billy,
Thanks for reading and feedback. I will look at moving 'hop' and re-evaluate the triple 's' line. Thanks for a pleasant and honest critique.