In the Name of the Father
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Heslopian----That makes me feel a bit better --I think. I am that very Narcissus as a child mentioned somewhere else, you see.

Billy --- I wanted to alter 'stand' to 'stands' as it is more proper grammatically if 'with' is to follow, rather than 'and'. Likewise, I would have had 'It's'. However, my attempts to make the changes produced some terrifying results, you know, a hand coming our of the lap-top giving me the finger, so I gave up. It can be ambiguous.......
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In the Name of the Father - by abu nuwas - 10-04-2011, 09:45 AM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by billy - 10-04-2011, 10:10 AM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by abu nuwas - 10-04-2011, 10:56 PM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by heslopian - 10-05-2011, 09:44 AM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by abu nuwas - 10-05-2011, 01:24 PM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by billy - 10-05-2011, 10:57 AM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by heslopian - 10-05-2011, 10:43 PM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by abu nuwas - 10-06-2011, 02:02 AM
RE: In the Name of the Father - by billy - 10-07-2011, 05:52 AM



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