10-05-2011, 08:30 PM
Coming in a little late but I did want to cast a vote for 'crowding' as well. It has a lot of kinetic energy for the poem and it gives me a sense of dynamics. I loved 'it fastens to the cadence of your voice' and 'It will not bring flowers to your door in a straw basket'. This is a great poem about the building blocks of language. Thanks for sharing.

