Parola
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Coming in a little late but I did want to cast a vote for 'crowding' as well. It has a lot of kinetic energy for the poem and it gives me a sense of dynamics. I loved 'it fastens to the cadence of your voice' and 'It will not bring flowers to your door in a straw basket'. This is a great poem about the building blocks of language. Thanks for sharing.
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Parola - by Philatone - 10-04-2011, 03:00 PM
RE: Parola - by billy - 10-04-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Parola - by addy - 10-04-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Parola - by Ca ne fait rien - 10-04-2011, 06:27 PM
RE: Parola - by billy - 10-04-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: Parola - by Philatone - 10-04-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Parola - by billy - 10-05-2011, 05:54 AM
RE: Parola - by Todd - 10-05-2011, 12:35 AM
RE: Parola - by Wildcard - 10-05-2011, 08:30 PM



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