10-05-2011, 12:36 PM
V. 3
Adjusted stanza 2, removing "is it"
Adjusted stanza 6 to "a life...spent searching"
Ask me
What is a bird?
A patchwork of feathers
Sewn with a beak and straw legs
A music box
Waiting to be turned in the trees
Perhaps even a symbol of liberty,
Knowing no borders, nesting in alcoves and
The nooks of porches.
No, no.
I find a bird to be no more
Than a life
Spent searching for the best patch of sun.
A vacation home in Guatemala. A time share in my mulberry.
A bird is a man with two addresses,
Two homes crafted by the same beak.
Two hiding places. Two nests
Where he is jury and judge.
I think of birds this way
To make them not so different,
Wings, only a means
To get from here to home.
Original
Adjusted stanza 2, removing "is it"
Adjusted stanza 6 to "a life...spent searching"
Ask me
What is a bird?
A patchwork of feathers
Sewn with a beak and straw legs
A music box
Waiting to be turned in the trees
Perhaps even a symbol of liberty,
Knowing no borders, nesting in alcoves and
The nooks of porches.
No, no.
I find a bird to be no more
Than a life
Spent searching for the best patch of sun.
A vacation home in Guatemala. A time share in my mulberry.
A bird is a man with two addresses,
Two homes crafted by the same beak.
Two hiding places. Two nests
Where he is jury and judge.
I think of birds this way
To make them not so different,
Wings, only a means
To get from here to home.
Original
(10-05-2011, 12:36 PM)Philatone Wrote: Ask me
What is a bird?
Is it a patchwork of feathers
Sewn with a beak and straw legs?
A music box
Waiting to be turned in the trees?
Or it must be a symbol of liberty,
Knowing no borders, nesting in alcoves and
The nooks of porches.
No, no.
I find a bird to be no more
Than a man
Searching for the best patch of sun.
A vacation home in Guatemala. A time share in my mulberry.
A bird is a man with two addresses,
Two homes crafted by the same beak.
Two hiding places. Two nests
Where he is jury and judge.
I think of birds this way
To make them not so different,
Wings, only a means
To get from here to home.
Written only for you to consider.

