10-04-2011, 10:43 PM
Aww! You wrote a poem about 'us'!!! 
A great poem, Aish. I like 'becoming one.' In a way, isn't every cliche a cliche because it fills a certain need. Becoming one can be rephrased a million ways, but 'joining together' or 'melting together' just sound lame in comparison to the feeling of being inside of another human, both literally and figuratively. This is all, of course JM(biased)O
Thanks for sharing.