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Hiroshima First: A haiku:

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10-04-2011, 02:53 PM

An interesting subject for a haiku... but hell. I liked it Smile

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(I loved the first line especially)

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:07 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:12 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:35 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 05:41 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:48 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by heslopian - 10-04-2011, 08:25 AM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by addy - 10-04-2011, 02:53 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-04-2011, 03:40 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by addy - 10-04-2011, 03:45 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-04-2011, 03:58 PM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by Aish - 10-06-2011, 03:50 AM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by billy - 10-07-2011, 11:01 AM

RE: Hiroshima First: A haiku: - by Aish - 10-07-2011, 02:25 PM

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