10-04-2011, 09:42 AM
Great stuff Jack. At the beginning lines of the poem (which were wonderful) I thought you were simply referring to muses, but as it progressed "angel" seemed the most apt description for the role. I love every bit of it, tbh. In the penultimate line, even though "millenia" ought to be the grammatically correct term, "milleniums" feels right in the way bit conveys everlasting time.
This reminds me of one of my favorite quotes: "What is history? History is women following behind with the bucket."
This reminds me of one of my favorite quotes: "What is history? History is women following behind with the bucket."
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?