The Bloody-minded Poet
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use for any word in poetry has no or little part in a dictionary Abu, we, or should, i say poet should, use words as tools. anything is fair game.
i only showed the usage cos you asked (i think)

personally for me, the thusly worked as well as what you changed it for. it works really well with bloody,, not as common in usage as it use to be, but used really well here. and i have no idea why i'm saying all this cos it's mild crit.

if it works the poet, use it, is my motto, the poet is the real proof reader after all Smile
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The Bloody-minded Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 07:26 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 07:51 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 08:41 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by heslopian - 10-03-2011, 08:54 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by billy - 10-03-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 05:22 PM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:42 PM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by Wildcard - 10-04-2011, 12:29 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by addy - 10-04-2011, 09:29 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by Leanne - 10-06-2011, 04:40 AM
RE: The Bloody-minded Poet - by abu nuwas - 10-06-2011, 04:43 AM



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