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Aish

Raven Queen

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10-03-2011, 01:34 AM

At the risk of sounding uncultured, what is a 'tit-bit'?

This is cute, Abu. I especially appreciate your final strophe - quite inspired. Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Rats - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 01:12 AM

RE: Rats - by Aish - 10-03-2011, 01:34 AM

RE: Rats - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 03:41 AM

RE: Rats - by Aish - 10-03-2011, 04:20 AM

RE: Rats - by abu nuwas - 10-03-2011, 06:16 AM

RE: Rats - by billy - 10-03-2011, 05:33 PM

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