10-03-2011, 01:32 AM
This is thought provoking. It has the concrete details of sprawl, which is vaguely sinister to my sensibilities, and yet some would say necessary. It also hints a bit toward more spiritual creation. There is an interesting tandem here, of gossamer dreams and concrete physicality.
I am still enjoying muddling this over, it lingers. Nice job.
'wells' seems to be a bit out of place where it is, although I understand it as a necessity. 'rising houses' should be 'raising houses'.
I am still enjoying muddling this over, it lingers. Nice job.
'wells' seems to be a bit out of place where it is, although I understand it as a necessity. 'rising houses' should be 'raising houses'.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?