Who'll Wash The Dishes

[billy]

For my money, it reads well, yet it seems that it could have been two poems, with the first part serious, and about war; after all, when the battle is over, all sorts of detritus and rubbish is left.

after reading all the feedback, i think you have a good point abu, busy as heck now, but whe i get the time i'll look at it. thanks for the feedback.

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thank for the comment Aish. i went to belsen many years ago and the area leaves an indelible impression on people who visit there, me included.