10-02-2011, 05:55 AM
Hi Stef,
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The lanuage is incredibly well-chosen IMO. I don't feel like I can add anything, but I will say that I liked the whitespace . . . I don't how else to say it, but that it feels right. Thanks for sharing, it's always a pleasure to see what you've come up with - always a good read and inspiring.
I really enjoyed reading your poem. The lanuage is incredibly well-chosen IMO. I don't feel like I can add anything, but I will say that I liked the whitespace . . . I don't how else to say it, but that it feels right. Thanks for sharing, it's always a pleasure to see what you've come up with - always a good read and inspiring.