I've been here and returned a few times aish.
it's obviously religious centred but how, the honeyed apples and wine brought to think of yom kippur. (specially with the press sins line and the temple womb) i love the the juxtaposition of religion (for a Jewish woman, i think) and science. i love how the 1st person wants to break the confines and reach those craters on the moon. science is the majik ( i think)
if i had a nit it would be bezoars, unless you're into medicine or scrabble (i'm an ex scrabble holic) it feels too obscure. and though you use religion as a great word to reference the knot or lump or stone, it still feels a little to far out there.
other than that i loved working the poem out (though i'm sure i got it all effin wrong
) thanks for the read.